i love the ending it finishes it jst right.

yeh thnx 4 commenting on mine....gr8 poem even if u think poetry is sh!t...same here lol

i loved that poem! im looking forward to reading more of yours! thanks for the comment

heyy great poem! lol yeah we do almost have the same name.. anyways keep writing!! :)

great job elly!!

Awesome poem, and thanks for the comments. Take care and keep writing

That was a really good poem. You are definately not alone. But try to keep going. K? Keep writing, cause i have read a few of your poems and they are really good. Take Care
~Ashley~

Great poem i really loved it, i really felt what you were writing, and trust your not alone. i mean everyone is saying that your not alone so not everyone can be rung. lol plz keep going and keep witting. i truly loved it. 5/5

Awesome poem , keep it up