Comments : Death Came Knocking

  • 19 years ago

    by Kia

    that was really good, i liked it good job

  • This is definately spooky, you have a way with words that makes your poems very realistic, 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen-AS-Angels do!

    Truely i can relate. It comes with thinking right.

  • 19 years ago

    by blarg

    GREAT ONE JASON! LOVE YA,BLARG

  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    think the rhyme scheme diluted the horro...is that a good thing or a bad thing...u temme that