by *~Criztal~* Dec 1, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A life can start, |
by lOVER
Your poem is good,but in a way it can be offensive, imsure many other people have had loved ones die just as i have, its not easy to just let someone go because of fate. other words your poem is right and wrong, none the less good poem |