SaD LOSt GuRL

by stephyG   Dec 1, 2004


This one girl felt
for this guy so true
but what he felt
was nothing new
everyday and every night
rivers of tears
this girl must fight
to soothe her pain
from what she finds out
who hes been with
only she can scream and shout
every things been done
and it will only go on
so she cries and she crys
forever and so long.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ankit V Master

    Pain , and just more pain .As it is said darkness is more profound then light.Anyways good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hope

    I really like this poem. It means so much to girls going throught their first heartbreak. It hurts so bad but it teaches you so much. Thanks for the comments. Never stop writting.
    Hope

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    Deep and heartfelt. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    The pain of love can be so traumatic.This is a very powerful piece emotion -wise, so sad with a touch of angst and futility in a tormented heart( although crys should be cries, a minor grammatical detail you may wish to change).The river of tears line is good and the last line has such an impact, 'forever and so long', a unique phrasing.So sad.Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by lynn

    That was a f..kin good poem..sad,yea guys are fu..in stupid..n e way stay writeing and stay up..

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