Awww...the world is just one giant heartbreak eh?...Take care hun, Lovely poem, it flowed well and the words and rhymes were perfect <3, great job xx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

lately all i can do is cry and i really like this poem cause i can recgonise some things in it
i've comment on your other poem too, wich was really good either
you're really talented please read some of mine too
5/5 for you!

milou

Great poem. keep up the good work.

Wow...i dont know what to say... that was amazing...=0

That was a f..kin good poem..sad,yea guys are fu..in stupid..n e way stay writeing and stay up..

The pain of love can be so traumatic.This is a very powerful piece emotion -wise, so sad with a touch of angst and futility in a tormented heart( although crys should be cries, a minor grammatical detail you may wish to change).The river of tears line is good and the last line has such an impact, 'forever and so long', a unique phrasing.So sad.Great job!

Deep and heartfelt. 5/5

I really like this poem. It means so much to girls going throught their first heartbreak. It hurts so bad but it teaches you so much. Thanks for the comments. Never stop writting.
Hope

Pain , and just more pain .As it is said darkness is more profound then light.Anyways good work.