10 comandments

by Cristi   Dec 1, 2004


Plastic bag against my face holding my breath ass if was the last i would take

suffocation, hard of breathing
a little bit of struggle coughing and wheezing
enough of struggle
as i lye motionless in a vegetative state taking in all this pain
trying to not move a muscle on my face lying stiff and cold as he over powered me and took control
bruises cuts and scrapes why why why god is this punishment i have to take to show i know I've made many mistakes
but damn this pain is worser then judgment day cause i was raped by a man who wrote the ten commandments and vowed to help the weak n confused but i was just left used why this pain and heatache do i survive

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cristi

    thankyou all for those comments on my other piece's of art i apperciate what eveyone on here has done to support me well thanks for everything love cristionna macalusso

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    by Cristi

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