Why

by katie!   Dec 1, 2004


Why do people have to go
leave me behind
all on my own

and why am I the first to cry
when I must see
a loved one die

Why do people always leave
when I need them
I wont believe

That they are gone
I'm on my own
they are gone

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessa Monee

    Hey,
    your poem is ok. But it would be better if it had a little more discription of your feelings. Although I thought it was overall good, exept the lastline because you used the same word to try and ryme. Sorry if I sounded a bit harsh I just though you'd want some constructive critisism. You can check out mine and give me all the mean and harsh critisism you want if you like...The poems name is *Marcus* (after my boyfriend...Although since then he has asked me to marry him, but it still fits well.

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