Wow that was a really wonderful poem!!! I loved it short and brilliant for 5 minutes!!
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That took you only 5 minutes???? That's amazing. You rock. THis is a really great poem too. Also, thanks for commenting on my poem! It was greatly appreciated.
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And you had 5 mins to spare? and U put this 2gether? Your stuff gets betta by the day.

ARRR... 5 minutes??? that's better than my 30 minutes writing ;) What a talent I must say :D you go girl ;) Keep up the good work, I'll go and check out all your other works that I missed out while I was away... :) take care.

I enjoyed reading this piece. In the simplicity were passionate emotions... the repitition was nice, and for a work of 5 minutes, well done.