I thought it was ok, it seems like you tryed and I pretty much liked it it was sad, but it happens so much in the world and it's good to see someone actually cares enough to write about something tragic like this.(appreciated if you check my new poem Care* or my old one *Marcus*)....Have fun writing!

I thought it was ok, it seems like you tryed and I pretty much liked it it was sad, but it happens so much in the world and it's good to see someone actually cares enough to write about something tragic like this.(appreciated if you check my new poem Care* or my old one *Marcus*)....Have fun writing!