wow this is really good. you have a really kool way with words. i love your poems. thanks for commenting on mine! ;] much love! -cal

Damn! This is....wow...so so so sad. Im sorry if this happened to you sweetie. You did a hell of a job conveying yourself.

Take Care, Jess x

awesome! i've read some others like this but they were all the same urs had something differn't about it and added more detail then others, very good
~selina

this is a great poem.. i was raped like 5 months ago n got pregnant by it n the same things were said n done to me.. great poem made me cry!!! keep it up

*~!~Starr~!~*

check out muh poems if u want thanks

That was a good poem, like how you ryhmed and worded it. sorry if that happen to you.....rape is a scaryin thing, but I never been raped and hope it don't ever happen. But nice job....

Jennifer:)

i understand ...having been in what seems like the same situtation ....infact i think this is the only time i can ever read this...i had a complete flashback ...to painful to forget ...but you got it out there and so have i. i really respect what you wrote and i'll pray that some day we'll both be whole again.
Raychel

hun, i dunno if this happened to you, but im so sorry if it did. i was horrified while reading, but thats because you did such a good job. the details were so in depth. if you ever need to chat, im always here! take care, xxx

No, this never happened to me. This is the story of my friends rape. Thanks everyone for the compliments on the writing.

i love this poem, as sad as it is its still really very well written, plz read some of mine, thx

ashley

omg im so srry that hapen to you...... stay strong...i hope you get better... 5/5

You very brave girl, love to ya....

.....octoberlifeguard xxx

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

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