I like yours better than I like mine yours have a better sense to them but we work well together lol yeah were crazy who would think of something like this? ha ha ha read it and weep lol

Some of the lines in here were absolutly powerful and greatly used,
"Your sadistic rhetoric of theological nonsense
Makes me sick."

I absolutly love your word choice in those lines. they create such a powerful effect and leave the reader with an understanding of what great pain and anger the writer is dealing with. good job