Dying inside

by Heather M Craig   Dec 2, 2004


I'm falling back in the dark hole
being thrown in every direction.
Each time i am happy, its all tooken away
like my life is suppossed to be questioned.
i have the burden of everyone else's hardships to carry
so i just pretend to be happy and set myself aside,
i mask my pain with the biggest fake smile
but inside i can't do anything but cry.
i don't want your pity and damn sure don't want your help...
why i hurt is b/c of so many of you,
i carry a secret no one will ever see
yeah i am dying inside but "don't i always make it through?"

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  • 19 years ago

    by Krete

    I think this would make a great song.

    Welcome to my favorites list ;)! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    I can relate to this and understand where you are coming from. Good job. You did a good job conveying yourself.
    With love, K Kristina

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    Great Poem! I Love it! this is amazing and so true! seriously this is great! keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    great work, really liked it, especailly the lines

    Each time i am happy, its all tooken away
    like my life is suppossed to be questioned.

    change tooken to taken and it wil b perfect.

    stary strong and take care

    lu -x-x-x-