great work, really liked it, especailly the lines

Each time i am happy, its all tooken away
like my life is suppossed to be questioned.

change tooken to taken and it wil b perfect.

stary strong and take care

lu -x-x-x-

Great Poem! I Love it! this is amazing and so true! seriously this is great! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I can relate to this and understand where you are coming from. Good job. You did a good job conveying yourself.
With love, K Kristina

I think this would make a great song.

Welcome to my favorites list ;)! 5/5