very nice, love the first stanza! 5/5

ok, the thing is, although it was good, i didn't like it, does that make sence? well neways i prly shouldn't ahve even voted cuz i dont like happy poems int he first place buti guess it was good i just didn't like it: )

ok, the thing is, although it was good, i didn't like it, does that make sence? well neways i prly shouldn't ahve even voted cuz i dont like happy poems int he first place buti guess it was good i just didn't like it: )

ok, the thing is, although it was good, i didn't like it, does that make sence? well neways i prly shouldn't ahve even voted cuz i dont like happy poems int he first place buti guess it was good i just didn't like it: )

Really nice poem.. Keep up the good work.. Please read/comment/rate some of my poems to it would mean a lot to me..
hugs to you

another fantastic peice of literature. 5/5