by Johnny Marlin 2 Dec 3, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In The Dark Of The Night |
Man you make me jealous haha. No you're my role model.. you know what I don't even know what I'm saying anymore. You've got some serious talent. Never stop. |
by Amilo
The first time I read this, I got kind of annoyed at all the capital letters. They kept this strain on me, and I found it difficult to concentrate on your poem. I stopped reading just stanzas before the end. For some reason that keeps me from finishing reading a lot of your work. In the end I did managed to finish, though. |
Loved it. |
WOW! i like it! i really like the last line too- it really does well to the poem. Congrats! This poem is awsome! keep it up! |
lol, thanks bob, you're awesome |