Fantastic Poem!!!

Another amazing poem Jason, you are an amazing talent:)

wow!

omg i love this poem the way u captured so much emotion and created an actual picture for me. i love it a lot.

HEY GREAT POEM BUT IS IT YOUR???
SOME OTHER DUDE HAS THE SAME POEM!!!
WELL ETHER WAY IT'S A GOOD POEM!!!
~STACY~

YES, THIS POEM IS MINE. SOMEONE BY THE NAME OF JOE HAS BEEN STEALING MY POETRY ALONG WITH OTHER PEOPLES. WHO STOLE THIS ONE, I DON'T KNOW YET, BUT IT DOESN'T SURPRISE ME.

"The Demons Weren't Genuine
Just Memories And Hate
An Illusion Created
From Depression's Weight"

I really admired that stance. Using demons as symbols for dark emotions was a clever concept for this piece. i liked it.

p.s. yes i know the person "joe" he has currently stolen 12 poems and it is comming to everyones attention.

lol, thanks bob, you're awesome

WOW! i like it! i really like the last line too- it really does well to the poem. Congrats! This poem is awsome! keep it up!
luv ya!
kt

Loved it.

The first time I read this, I got kind of annoyed at all the capital letters. They kept this strain on me, and I found it difficult to concentrate on your poem. I stopped reading just stanzas before the end. For some reason that keeps me from finishing reading a lot of your work. In the end I did managed to finish, though.

Well, what can I say... the capital letters were unique, and... bothersome, I must admit... But I praise you for a job well done.

This part is extremely effective..

"The Demons Weren't Genuine
Just Memories And Hate
An Illusion Created
From Depression's Weight"

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Man you make me jealous haha. No you're my role model.. you know what I don't even know what I'm saying anymore. You've got some serious talent. Never stop.