It isn't as good as my other poem but i wrote this one before and thought it would be a good idea to put yourself in some one elses shoes. hope you like it

Thats sad! I like it though!
I especially like this part:
"Next thing you know the sheds gone up in flames; the fire is spreading and you can't find a way out. You start to panic,
theres no way out."
Keep it up
Sammi

sheesh u rite spooky stuf! i like it!

that was sooo good! keep it up!
it was like, sad and kinda dark, but it told a story. i love it!!

<3 jenny

workin on a new 1 at the moment. hopin 2 type it up in a few days