You Were The Brother

by Briana   Dec 4, 2004


You were the Brother
I loved
the one I want here
but now you turned
out to be the ones
grave I will come visit
each year
you always made me laugh
sometimes your insults would
even make me cry
but never mad me mad enough
to ever wish you'd die
now that your gone
the family won't ever be a famiy again
but hearing all these stories about
how it all happened
always makes my thoughts start to spin
I know things would be easier
only If you were here
but now your in a better place
ya know way up there.

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  • 19 years ago

    by vanessa Monee

    You did a good job at writing this poem...Although you wrote mad instead of made in one of the sentances but otherwhise you did a good job.(Appreciated if you check out my new poem Care* or my old one *Marcus*....Thanks!)

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessa Monee

    You did a good job at writing this poem...Although you wrote mad instead of made in one of the sentances but otherwhise you did a good job.(Appreciated if you check out my new poem Care* or my old one *Marcus*....Thanks!)

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessa Monee

    You did a good job at writing this poem...Although you wrote mad instead of made in one of the sentances but otherwhise you did a good job.(Appreciated if you check out my new poem Care* or my old one *Marcus*....Thanks!)

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