My Shadow By:PaPiZpRiNcEsS

by brittany   Dec 4, 2004


Caught beneath my shadow
with rain pouring down on me.
I listen as nature speaks.
Running in the dark
with stars that shine so bright
you can make it longer
just stay holding tight.
Falling in the distance
without his sweet embrace.
Twined with fine silk lace.
Hard to remember details upon his face.
Lying and cheating without any grace.
Lord guides me with the fog filling the area around me.
Leading me into a field of flowers so beautiful and smell so sweet.
But still realizing the obvious.
Crouching to one knee,
Crying,
with your rain pouring down on me.
Hearing a call from my savior
But not finding him outside this nightmare.
I've lost my hearing
with my heart beating so fast I can't
breath.
I search and I find nothing .
Nothing but the shadow that I'm caught beneath.

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  • 19 years ago

    by brittany

    thanx u'all 4 ur comments i realli am thankful.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i dont know y this has got a 3.5... i enjoyed it all and thank you hun for the comment...but nah i dont needa talk w/ anyone... i have one friend i tell everything too and he helps more than n e thing... i dont needa drag another life down but thanx for the offer...God bless you girl.
    <3 heather craig

  • 20 years ago

    by Sad_Little_Kitty_Kat

    GOOD POEM;)
    ~STACY~