Firstly Id like to say thanks for commenting on my poem! Ok now to your poem... I really liked it alot! Its very true. Well ill read your other poems cya

i love this, this is the best poem i have very read and i have read alot for poam this is the best poem in the world.

oh thankyou em 4 u 2 say that means so much it really does that is so sweet lol u r deff high in my books i think dats all my poems uve commented on and uve said some amazeing stuff thank u so much it means heaps 2 me!
ur work is great 2!

Good Poem, I wish I could feel like that, but i just feel like life suckz, it isnt worthwhile...keep it up :)

xoxox CaRz xoxox

gr8 poem gr8 message keep up the good work

I like it alot... .. it is true to life.. and is eye opening to the commonalities of life that are for the most part overlooked... i like overviews of life .. and that was a great title for your poem .. i like it ^_^