by Sarah Dec 4, 2004
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
The music from the nightclub spills through the window |
by Lydia O
I really enjoyed the contrast you described here between your moments of peaceful tranquility and the pounding sounds from outside. Nice work. |
calm is a very good way to describe this poem... another great poem! |
by FTS Miles
That is a tremendously thoughtful peace. Calm and comforting, despite the imagination placing a driving beat in the background. Very nice! |