This poem is very powerful in its own way and objectivity. Many poems put the author (the "I") in a position that is very passive and reflective, so it is an interesting perspecitve to have the author offer such a strong position where the reader is the one who is reactive to the authors actions. Good work, you only have one, write more I want to check them out. |
i'm just sitting here tonight, thought i would go check out every poem by you just to know you more...(bored with an anti social life) anyhow...this poem speaks truth...in the short time i have been talking to you you reflect such charecteristics in yourself...its truly a blessing. (blessings can be hell sometimes i know) But anyhow...i found this poem to hold something so strong...something more left to find. |