Great poem different but very good!!

pretty good. i like it. 5/5

Short and sweet. I have to admit, this isn;t one of your best, but still good. 4/5 on this one. keep it up!
-Cheerfully Cynical-

great job!! keep it up!! :)

Sad poem, but very good. I really liked how you added an abstract meaning to it. Keep it up!
-Kate