You commented on my poem "Fall," this one is alot like it. I think this is good, I enjoyed it alot. It is unclear in many ways and thats what makes it good. Most poems describe everything and close every possible door or window of imagination that the reader can assume or add anything. You didnt, you left it pretty open and I really enjoyed that. Great job, I am going to check out more.
With love, K. Kristina

thankyou for your coments

i just wanted to clear one thing up about this oem, it really doesn't have anything to with suicide or cutting, it's a very symbbolic poem, symbolising how cruel and awful this world is and you really can't do much about it.

Wow that poem was really powerful. I was confused, and then i realized I was supposed to be. The confusion and conflicting statements makes it really open to interpretaion, which is awesome.... it makes you think about how you relate to the poem in a more personal way.... Loved it, keep it up!
Aaron

I love this poem. Good job