I like this. Quotations might help, but poetic license is more important than my opinion, lol. I think this is great, it address' something that most all people can relate too.
With love, K. Kristina

yep sounds just like high school lol. love it.

i think this poam is very true because my best friend did that to me when we when to high school she when for all the guys she could get and forgot about me then we had a big figth.