this is also very good, i like the first two lines:

Clouds drip past moonlight
Tossed into spirals from a lit ambiance

great job... 5/5!

hehe awesome awesome poem..I agree with Erica the lines:
Clouds drip past moonlight
Tossed into spirals from a lit amibance
Is really good and I like the personification! I really enjoyed this poem cause the moon is my sign and its very descripitive..another job well done by you..I enjoy ur work!! Keep on wwritting okay..excellent job here for sure!