like always great poem, keep on writing.

wow spooky! its very well written I like the picture that it makes my mind form... does that make sense,...god i'm hyper tonight....anyway back to the point....I like it- a 5. easily.

great piece! it's very deep in one way but clear and obvious in another. sorry if i just commented tonight. keep writing. take care:)

Heh,
Well I'm on, I'm off. Never really here, never really there, you know how it goes. Thanks for the comment ^_^

--Bryce~