Destiny

by MAYBE TOMORROW   Dec 4, 2004


He had always been the quiet one
spent his lunch inside his truck
and once he lost his father
he didnt have much luck

no one could get through to him
he wouldnt let them in
until he found a special girl
who found the love within

she suddenly approached him and knocked upon his door
once he got to know her
he couldnt ask for more

so many months were spent
no love stronger has been made
some bad news had arrived
but they knew their love wont fade

he said "im going to the air force
i know we'll make it through
before i leave id like to know
will you say i do?"

tears formed in her eyes
she didnt want to be mean
she had her whole life ahead of her
she was only seventeen

so she turned him down
yet didnt move on
and when he returned 4 years from now
the doubts she held were gone

a few months later a wedding was planned
he had waited quite a while
to slip that ring onto her finger
and watch her come down the isle

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  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    thanks im very grateful :) ill check out ur work!

  • 19 years ago

    by HeAvENLy UniQue

    Awwwwwww thats all I can say.. :)

    take care

    CyN

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    thanks! it is very very very much appreciated lol ill be sure to keep in touch bye!

  • 19 years ago

    by Sw33ti3

    awww thats a very nice poem u got there...a very happy ending..i loved it..keep it up...and thx for the comment on ma poem..laterz
    *XoX Sw33ti3*