"Only then do I fathom
That this added Light
You have this morn
Is our unborn child
Shining in your eyes."

this is such a beautiful poem. again, your imagery is just lovely, the words you use to describe each motion are beautiful. lovely job

(i dont know if this is a poem based on a true even but if so congardulations!)

Very Beautiful Writing...just like painting a picture with words

Actually, this is naught but an image, a hopeful vision, but thanks for the well wishes nonetheless. ;)

AWW wow what a lovely poem. I liked how you wrote it, with the giggling and the hinting with the hand on the belly. Beautiful poem. Very touching indeed.

i like your unborn poem but i wrote a poem about unborn also check it out to see if you like it then holla back nice job a total 5 5 5 5