Too many lies

by »«¤ß詤»«   Dec 5, 2004


*hey i wrote dis recently n its full of my feelings so pls vote and comment*

so i guess its true
from the very start
i was lied to
you tricked and lied
and broke my heart
you played and used me
and tore my world apart
you once said
that you couldn't live without me
and i actually believed u
back then your love set me free
but to find out it was all a dare
to find out love isn't very fair
it tore out my heart and soul
and left inside a gaping hole
six months we lasted
and just after we parted
to find out it was all a joke
to find out my lover was a lying, player kinda bloke
well that was it i couldn't take it
but you didn't care
after all you had faked it
but then you came out and said you loved me
and dumping me was a mistake
i was left shocked
and you said your love for me you couldn't shake
so i said sorry but i don't love you
Ive moved on
after everything you put me through
and it was there and then
i had got my revenge
so that was it i was through with those kinda men
for he had told too many lies
just to get what he wanted
and to my surprise
i am a stronger person
i can now live without a guy
well.........
i can try cant i......?

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  • 19 years ago

    by emma

    i think you have a gife for wrigth poem all of you poem that i have read are so good they all have a good mean and when you read you feel your plan you are in.

  • 19 years ago

    by CareBear

    Ok, Your stuff is good!! It's a lot better than mine, thanx for commenting, i just write what I'm feeling, sometimes it doesn't make sence coz I get so confused but yeah, Keep up the good work!!
    Love Carz xoxox

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