My very last thought of Us

by Holly   Dec 5, 2004


Your hand in hers and not mine
I thought id be the one by your side

She is were I thought I would be
Your with her and not me

She kisses you the way I wish I had
I’m not hurt, I’m not even mad

You fought for my attention
But your now giving her your affection

What we could have had I know
Your feelings you did so much to show

She’s in the place I thought I’d be
Your with her, I though you’d be with me

I fear I was the one who held back
Because courage is what I lack

I was who you spent hours with
I was unsure what I wanted to give

Again I’m the one to loose
This is just yet another bruise

You seeemed to want more
I thought it was me you were calling for

Now I know I was wrong
Or was it you who did me wrong?

Now even more confused
Beginning to think I was just used

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    Holly,
    This was a great poem. Keep it up. I can really relate to this poem! Awesome job and thank you for voting for my poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by midnightlove467

    this was an awesome poem! i have had experiences just like this..its sucks! i hope this didnt really happen to u...! Great job, 5/5! if u have a chance to read/rate/comment on my poem Love, Secrets, Death, and All that would be awesome, its my newest poem and i dont know how i like it! Thanks ~Meg

  • 19 years ago

    by bRiTbRiT

    omg i love this poem its so sweet... good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Bill

    Thank you very much. Very touching poem. I Loved it. Keep writing you have great talent. Remember,above all else, stay true to thy self
    Love always and forever,
    Bill

  • 20 years ago

    by Nesic

    I can relate to this poem so much it's scary.... you did a good job. keep it up :)

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