Wow! Awesome poem, Jason... I love the simple flow of this... and I love that you are still looking to God for your help....

This is really a grand poem man. I love the ending..."Im From Your Design"

God Will Help...if you ask, and maybe I can orate? ttyl buddie...

And God BLESS you ;)! 10/5!

nice one! i really like this. and don't worry God will help you because he's really nice and loves you. hehe. everything is gradually getting better for me...well at least at school it is. take good care!!

wow that was good...i am gonna pray for you...God bless you Jason. loves.

Wow Jason! I loved it...Great Job and I hope that you keep on writing! God Bless you! Cheers to the happiness..
~!~Sedusha~!~

i really like ur poem, i stopped believing in god a long time ago, but now i don't really think about it

wow! so true- u definatly deserve the five. I like how your poems are blunt lol. But they are good because you pick out some of the problems in our society.
Congratulations and keep up the awsome poem writing =D
luv ya!
kt

hey... don't leave us... *sniff sniff* but if you must go... Then go... But this poem on the other hand can never leave.. It's perfect... I loved every word of it.. Keep it up and Take Care
Angel

Wow, absolutely amazing! Great write...Loved it! It flowed flawlessly and the diction was incredibly...keep it up <3 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

that is a good poem, a lot of what is goin though my mind right now. i've grown up in the church but i dont know what to beleive right now. great poem