Comments : Window Walk

  • 20 years ago

    by ~Bloodied&Broken

    Thats a really beautiful poem! You need to read through it again, there are a lot of mistakes, doubling of words etc. (oh and its spelt climbed not claimed) Sorry. I really like it but it can become hard to read if there are too many mistakes. Great poem though. Keep it up!
    luv ya and good luck!
    kt