Friendship days

by ღ°Starr°ღ°Moody°ღ   Dec 5, 2004


Best friends you promised we would always be
Best friends I thought I would always see
Where did we go our sepertae ways,
What ever happened to the good old days?
I have no one to help with the pain
I have no one to stand by in the rain
I am getting lonelier now and sicker too
I wish I had someone to tell but that someone is you
I did not eat again today
I told them all to just go away
I am going through some tough times
It is so tough that it makes me rhyme
I need a friend, I need you so
Tell me things I need to know
Tell me why you left me here
Tell me why you are never near
I need you here to help me through
Because without you what do I do?

Again the spacing is messed up but please!!!!! tell me what you think i appreciate it alot!!!

*~!~starr~!~*

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  • thanks i am glad ya both liekd the poem!!! lol

    love yall
    Starr

  • 19 years ago

    by Kaitlin Kristina

    Again, I think I have told you this before and if I didnt I should have, because I thought it, YOU ARE A NATURAL. Many people you read and you know it is forced, but you really have a feel for the rhyme scheme and flow. Great job.
    With love, K Kristina

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