Hi! so sad but an absolutely amazing poem! U got real talent! I'm sorry that u feel that way, I feel the same at the moment too. Tak care n stay strong

xxxx T

that is amazing. bloody hell. that is woah! omg babe, u really did it this time. that is an amazing poem, definetly one of your best. 9999999999999/10

Wow, this one was good too!! I really enjoy reading your stuff..

§The Only Rose In This Desert§

"as my wounds slowly scar
upon my fragile skin"

Loved this line!

You had some great lines in here and some great descriptions. The happy bunnies were a little random though. Well done, a nice piece.

Awww I really liked this poem espec the line...as the tears slowly fade
from sight of naked eyes....
keep up the good work! luv LoU xxx

This is brilliant.
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