Comments : Melted tears (for every broken angel)

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Hi! so sad but an absolutely amazing poem! U got real talent! I'm sorry that u feel that way, I feel the same at the moment too. Tak care n stay strong

    xxxx T

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    that is amazing. bloody hell. that is woah! omg babe, u really did it this time. that is an amazing poem, definetly one of your best. 9999999999999/10

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow, this one was good too!! I really enjoy reading your stuff..

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    "as my wounds slowly scar
    upon my fragile skin"

    Loved this line!

    You had some great lines in here and some great descriptions. The happy bunnies were a little random though. Well done, a nice piece.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    Awww I really liked this poem espec the line...as the tears slowly fade
    from sight of naked eyes....
    keep up the good work! luv LoU xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by colourmehappy

    This is brilliant.
    x