This is a good poem, and i particularly like the "our fingers locked together."

thats really gd. (thanks for commenting on mine too!)

Very good! I can get the feelings from the poem and the expressions are great!
Elizabeth Marie

i liked that verse 2!! it made me smile :-) , love ur style of writing

love H xxxx

Theres so many feelings in this poem. You clearly describe all the physical feelings that being with the one you love brings on.
I also like the "arms around me.." And fingers "locked together" creates a vivid picture of 2 hands joined,locked across a, well anywhere.

derz not much to explain, itz beautiful! i loved it!

I like this one alot, it is really very sweet and heartfelt. Great job
With love, K Kristina

aw thats so cute I love it... very sweet and to the poin.. by the way thanx for your comment on my poems

Sarah, WOW! Absolutely beautiful. Great job. You've got alot of talent. Going to read some more of yours. I've added you to my favorites. I love poems like you do. lol

Hi Sarah.I really liked this one...very good writing

wow ur poem was very touching and its the best feeling in the world.Would you comment on my poem "Inside My Mind" im tryin to see wat ppl think of my work.I would really appreciate it:)

Hey, this is awesome, keep up the great work! and take care chicky!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy