by I Have the Sweetest Man Ever! Dec 5, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
AGAIN |
by Just me
I have no intentions of fighting..But i have a small sugestion to this poem...The very last line that reads "everything you will lose"... I think it would sound so much better if you wrote "everything I will lose" It flows better with the poem.. Well check out mine and see if you think you have any suggestions...Laters! |