by Robert Dec 5, 2004
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Under the shroud of night we take our chance, |
by Blissful
This was sensual and not raunchy in any way with made it a joy to read. The emotions described were beautiful and loving. Well done *5/5* |
by nikki
Wow, it was awesome. was so loving and deep, emotional. it was great the flow was ok and the wording could have used a few extra bits in it (just my idea), but over all couldn't find anything else wrong with it. 5/5 |
by StormyStar
You have great emotion when you write. keep it up. i like it. |
by George
Pretty nice. I dont usually like this kind of a thing, but it didn't come across in an inappropriate manner, so it was actually kind of touching |
by Vanessa
For you bring the man in me I wish to be |