I agree with Louisa. I enjoyed it, too! I'd like to see you write a poem where you don't rhyme at all, though. See how it comes out.

hey fantastic poem!!!! i loved it so much i guess becuz i can really relate but either way it was beautiful. maybe u could check out some if my poems like 'hurt one 2many times' and 'too many lies'??
("v") bec

this is a really good poem...I am going thru the same thing with one of my "friends" trying to take the guy I loved for the last 3 years...keep it up xxx

Great job! I love it! and yes I mean it lol I voted 5.0 so it raised it up to 4.8! It reminds me of . . . him lol keep it up!

Love, Taylor

absolutely love this poem! you captured a great sense of emotion and it sounds wonderful! keep writing!
-xoxo-
Lauren

Very good..I like it alot
Good Job

great job hun must i be a damn repeat lol...God bless ...loves.

Beautiful poem and i can relate to it, it flowed nicely! Loved it and Merry Xmas:)

Aww sad poem hun. Hope things are alright...Incredible write, as always. Keep writing please xxx <33 xxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx