EiGhTeEn!

by Heather Dunagan   Dec 6, 2004


Its hard to believe,
Your eighteen!
On your birthday,
I sat in my room,
And I was thinking,
I was thinking about our relationship!
We were never really close,
We always fought and argued!

But now as I think about it,
I wish that we got along,
I need a brother like you to talk to,
To look up to!
But your not there!

Its hard to think about you leaving,
Yeah, I know
We don’t talk,
We barley even look at each other!
But yet I know,
You are in my life,
You’re my brother,
Even though we don’t talk,
I know I can still look up to you,
You will always be there!
I love you Tommy!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashmore

    Good-Good. Nothing is wrong expect a small hicc-up. You should go more in-dept (details) in your poem(s) Otherthan that, perfect-o. Wonderful Job. Keep on Writing.

    Take Care, Jes x

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