In Love With Love

by Dani Ward   Dec 6, 2004


Im in love with love,
and that makes me a fool,
cause i fall in love so easy,
any girl could make me her tool.
they could pretend to care,
pretend they loved me,
and i would fall for them,
and bow at their knee.
if any girl knew this,
she could make me her putty,
id wait on her hand and foot,
even though it sounds nutty.
a girl could break my heart,
time and time again,
but id always take her back,
i would never be able to win.
i know that its stupid,
and i shouldnt be like this,
but i just cant help it,
id melt at her kiss.
i cant change this fact,
no matter how hard i try,
and i'll be played by girls,
until the day that i die.

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  • 19 years ago

    by [Neon/] ©

    haha... i like this. it reminds me of me kinda... except without the whole girl dealy. yeah, i have that whole thing with guys controlling me.. but i'm getting much better.
    my last bf was a "teddybear" type of guy.. but we broke up because he became quite obsessive with me. *cough cough hack* i can say that i stand up for myself quite well now though..

  • 19 years ago

    by It Itty

    I'm giving you a five because this is such a beautifuly written poem, but understand that I in no way, shape, or form think you are stupid or will be played by girls all your life. Like I said though, it is a beautiful poem and expresses how you feel incredibly well.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lipton

    Bah! Even tho some of it's true, you're not stupid... I'm like that, to... it's just... yeah... nevermind...

    ~Ciao Lipton

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ruiz

    awww poor baby, itz not always like that trust me, ur goen tru all this bcuz da gurl das waitin 4 u is da best one! juss keep expressin ur feelinz like dat, i luved it
    ER

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