Comments : A world where nothing good can live

  • 19 years ago

    by Autumn

    that is a beautiful poem! it seems like thats the world where i live!

  • 19 years ago

    by Aysha

    really luv ur style of writing.. i luved this line "A land of which the sun never was told" i also luved these two lines "Decaying messages of love on the table,
    Fastened together with a rusted staple" deep emotions and great poem! luv ya!

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    OMG AMAZING...that's all I can say!

  • 19 years ago

    by littleshadowgirl

    WOW I WISH I COULD WRITE LIKE THAT HEY CHECK OUT MY POEMS SOME TIME LATER