by Ria Dec 6, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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Amazing job! i love this! :) |
by Nici
I am not sure about the layout of this poem, by this I mean how many lines are in each verse. However, like with you other poems the overall effect is good. |
Is sad and fairly passionate, a good read. |
I really like your metaphors that you use however this one didn't grab my attention like the other one but it was still good and i like the way you put your poetry together(Lol, hope that makes sense) |
by shannon
wow...that was amazing |