Hey my sister has this guy she knows and she feels the same way about him...it was like this poem was meant for her!!!!! Omg Omg Omg i gottta tell her!!!! I'll be right back!!!!!! oh ya...good job

I GUESS THATS ME. . LUV YA TOO TTYL CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEM. .TAKE CARE TTYL

Instead of using "u" and "2" use "you" and "too,two,to" it looks SO much more professional. It actally tells people weather or not you really LIKE writing poetry just by the way you type. Other than that, this was a beautiful poem, the rhythem was a little off but other than thet it was good. 4/5. keep it up and take care!

-Cheerfully Cynical

very nice poem i really liked it