this poem is about me, I am wiccan yes. I wrote this because I suffer from being discriminated for what I believe in... But I will stay strong and never fall... "I can fall 4 times but I will get up 5 times"...

excellent poem, don't let people ever talk down to you because of what you do, or don't believe. Take care, i don't know if you read my post, but I am leaving this site. I'll check in on you every once in a while. Take care, and feel free to e-mail me, I'd love to chat sometime.

I will miss you so much Jason! I will keep in touch with you!

Yeah, so like bold effort.

Being a Wiccan is a tough but rewarding road to chose amidst todays climte of Christianity....believe me i know..been there.

This poem is well conceived, need some3 work in terms of how it flows i think...like a few words clipped or added in placed to make it more syllabically sound...but yeah...well done.

Blessed be.

Wow Girl... I just can feel this poem! I liked it a lot! God Bless you and always be happy!
~!~Angel Loving Sedusha~!~

excellent poem! very good job, i like it!