Comments : Until the Last Goodbye

  • 19 years ago

    by *K~L~C*

    luvd it

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Wow Erin, such a sad poem, but you write with the soul of an angel...its great to know there are ppl like you still out there. Love, Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Wicked poem I really like this though
    **Maybe you want to make your outer shell
    Match the way that you feel inside**
    Very daeep and moving!
    LOVED IT and i'm glad your friend has stopped now:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Natalie84

    What a touching poem....Awesome dedication. Some times you can't help no matter how bad you want to...you just got to let them know that you will always be there for them....They'll come around. Like you said he did at the bottom... Anyway great poem...Keep it up and take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Very well written, Erin...I'm glad your friend stopped....but also glad you chose to write about such a sensitive and needful subject.

  • 19 years ago

    by Knoxy

    Hey, this is really good...it runz really smoothly and makes a lot of sense...keep it up and take care..
    ~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    very good. poem

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    That is a really touching poem, very well written I really enjoyed it, well done xx

  • its a beautiful poem, and i can relate to it as well... i used to have a friend like this, though we've drifted apart now... i know if she ever needed me, no matter how far apart we were, i'd still race to her side.

  • 19 years ago

    by Eraklis

    Sad and Great