by jessie keel Dec 7, 2004
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
The thing that goes the furthest toward making life worth while. That cost the least and does the most.... is just a pleasing smile; The smile that bubbles from the heart, that loves it's fellow men, will drive away the clouds and gloom and bring the sun out again There is no room for sadness.... When we see a cheery smile, it always has the same good luck it's never out of style, It spurs as on to try again when failure makes us blue, The simples of encouragement are good.... for me and you. |
by kye
Hey there! you have that spark of being the best writer that you can be. although i wish there was more depth in your poem. i would like to read a poem that really came from within your heart. a feeling that truly belongs to you. it's a good start though. but still have a long way to go... i'll be waiting for that poem that will really make my heart feel what you feel. good luck!!! 4/5 |