i really like the ending...good work

I liked the ending to this. I think a lot of people could probably relate to it. The only thing is, I think the depth of the poem is a bit to.. you know. It sounds like the way the person hates themselves is slightly exaggerated, but still a good piece of work

this is great i really lyk it good work 5/5

This poem is really sad. But I was feelin it. Nice write. >3jess

Wow, this is amazing, 5/5. I love this verse:

But some how you remain in my life. What words can I say oh God what can I do,
To finally once and for all be rid of you.

Very nicely done! Keep your head up.
-xx-
Much Love
Broken

wow so deep but so powerful.
so much said in such a small space
keep it up.

Jacs
xxx

This was a great poem!! It was very deep and sad...and had a lot of meaning in every word..great job keep up the good work!!
*~*cryingontheinside*~*

I loved it, it was amazing. i loved the ending most of all where it said
I HATE YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU ARE TO BE,
Yet as I see in the mirror the boy I truly hate is me.

it is just such a statement. i thought it was great well 5/5. and great work