wow...i really love fell into this poem. i am sorry about ur family and everything go thru mine is the opposite in most ways but yet i feel a lot like you when it comes to being the one everyone else runs to and hiding everything inside...you are a really good poet, hun, you will become something someday i see it now. loves. |
Thanks guys, that really means alot to me. Thanks so much Heather, I hope your right. Your so sweet. |
awesome poem, very descriptive... 5/5! |
Your Work is just absolutely wonderful, your an amazing writter and you have a good way with words, keep up the good work! but before i go, i must ask if you would vote And comment on a few of my poems, personally i would like you to vote and comment on, "your poems just for you", "Theres a feeling that i get" and also "the Wonderful Place"! anyothers that you wish to look at would be just fine too! |
I'd say i know exactly how you feel, but that would be wrong, I know i can't feel exactly the same way although really damn close! lol. My upbringing was not so much left alone, but not very good to put it simply. For only sixteen you have an awesome vocabulary! Half the words you use people I graduated with wouldn't be able to pronounce let alone know what they mean. Now i get a vauge idea of why you related with my poem "Childhood?" And I'm sorry things were/are so ruff for you. But if it is any consolation I think you did an excelent job of raising yourself. |
Thanks Aaron, again, your terribly sweet. |
by Cimara
Kaitlin, you are amazing! that poem touched more than you will ever know! i was lucky enough to have a good upbringing but i have experienced so much of what you wrote. especially all the stuff about the mask and crying on the inside. but even though i haven't experienced some of that beautiful poem you still made me feel as though i had. well done..you should be so proud of that poem and yourself! |
I really like this poem, its soo good, awesome job! you really have a lot of talent in writing! thanks for checking out my poems, i really appreciate it! |
you sound exactly like me from the go to person right down to the family. |
by lisa marie
I really like this poem becasue i can relate to it in a way. Wondefully put together |