What You Can't See

by Ashleigh Skye   Dec 7, 2004


You see its teeth,
in the cold dark night.
You see its eyes,
but not with your sight.

Your hear its voice.
dripping with ice.
He cuts your wrist,
with just one slice.

He spreads his wings,
and starts to fly,
up into the sky,
as you wither and die.

Death will take you,
in its cold dark hand,
and butterflies,
will cross the land.

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I wrote this in school one day with the help of my friend, he came up with the very last verse

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Cool...and the ending is the best...your fried is good...

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    thanx everyone It makes me feel really great to hear you guys say that... Im gonna tell my friend as well becuase he helped me finish it.. thanx for your input.. I will hopefully creat a new one soon. take care everyone and keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW, this definately wasn't funny...lol. I really liked this one, you are a REALLY great writter i have not one suggestion for you because it flowed PERFECTLY!!!! again 5/5
    take care
    Scooby

  • 19 years ago

    by jennifer

    I really like this poem it's very unique.

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